Deanna 

Ms. Shukairy

Writing

10/27/13

                                                                       Alcohol

    Alcohol should be illegal because there are many cons toalcohol effects. Alcohol kills many people because for example drunk drivers that get in car accidents because they’re not controlling their driving. It kills innocent people. It affects the brain and causes death. When people have a party they should drink a little. If they drink to much they could throw up. Alcohol should be illegal because it has harmful effects on society.

Likewise alcohol should be illegal. The eighteenth adamant said alcohol is illegal but they change it. It changed because everyone still kept drinking it. The people who drink alcohol start craving alcohol. A lot of people get killed from over drinking. For example it makes your brain slower down and kills brain cells.  Teen age kids get under pressure and they do it to be cool. But it’s very dangerous for them because there so young for alcohol. At college they have some parties’ that have drinking and most of them are under age. When people drink their aware they will probably get drunk they start driving crazy and crash. When they crash they just do not hurt themselves. They hurt others too and it affects society.

  

Likewise, alcohol should be illegal because people get sad and depressed when family members get killed from any harmful cause of alcohol. Most accidents from alcohol are from drunk driving. It’s very dangerous when people are on the road. When people are driving and drinking you think you are driving straight. But when you hear crash you realize you weren’t driving good you were probably driving all over the place. Then you arehurt but you hurt the other person even more. Then someone feelreally guilty about. You can not face their family or you kill someone else that their family loves them a lot. Alcohol abuse is another harmful thing. It could break up families that are super close to each other. It hurts the one’s they love the most. The alcohol just becomes a hobby and bad harmful effects happen. There are a lot of tears from alcohol harmful effects on society and people.

While alcohol has many harmful effects, some people believe it’s their choice to drink. Some believe it’s an individual’s choice to drink or not. This position is weak because alcohol has harmful effects on those who are not drinking. Thousands die from drunk drivers because of car accidents. Now you see and hear do not drink and drive because it’s so dangerous. Brain starts to become slower every time you drink it. It’s not the best to drive when you are drunk. It is dangerous before you drive drink some water were do not drink at all. When you want to drink alcohol try to stop your self. Have other drinks instead like coke, water, sprite, juice and kitty cocktail. They are great suggestions.

  

 In conclusion alcohol should be illegal because there are many cons to it. Try to stop drinking alcohol by drinking other soft drinks. Once you do this there will be so many good effects. For example no drunk driver less people getting hurt. No braindamage, better health. Not abusing your family if it’s caused by drinking alcohol, there’s more love and happier families. Not getting sick and throwing up, safer parties. Teen age kids are not going under pressure and drinking alcohol. So if alcohol is illegal all these things will be gone and better place for people. Alcohol should be illegal because it causes many harmful effects on society and very dangerous.

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